Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Untitled Bit of Flash Poetry

The words
are never spoken,
and faded eyes slip away
to anywhere
but the spaces
between.

Dreams lost
amid a storm
of grey
and wishful thinking.

Sugar, he says,
it can’t always be
roses and winestems.
Sometimes
glass shatters,
and thorns
have their place.

I ignore it all
and drift away
from me,
from you.

Out of the whole,
and into a sleepless
walk -
numb,
and barely
breathing.

5 comments:

Adam said...

Ooh, Adam likey! :D

The roses and winestems part was lovely. :)

Adam

Kmcelhinny said...

Wow Damien, you always leave me wanting more with your work. That was great, and really pulled at my strings. :)I agree with Adam about the roses and winestems. Very nice.

Kara.

C R Ward said...

Very nice! I love the phrasing of this.

slcboston said...

Would we appreciate the rose half so much were it not for the thorns we encounter along the way?

Of course, I'm more of a cherry blossom kind of guy myself. :D

Maria said...

I found your blog through AW and I love it! This piece in particular is beautiful and deep. Keep it up! =))